The yummy melon
Mm mm i saw the yummy watermelon coming towards me.
I was the first to touch the melon. Well i was holding the watermelon
it felt like a really smooth rock on the green vine.
1...2...3 I bit into the flesh and it taste like red juice.
The pips looked like little bugs. The flesh looked like it was frozen.
When it wasn't cut it looked like a really green pickle.
The seeds were scattering around my mouth.
I saw Koby's face and he did not like the melon but i did.
Yummy slurp i heard every eating there melon. by Alexis
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