Persimmons
On count on three 1,2,3 chomp. ‘Mmmmmm’ I couldn't understand why people do not like the persimmons.
Patience dropped her fruit on the mat.
Mania didn't even take a nibble. I looked at Mia T’s face she looked like she did not want to finish her fruit.
It looked like she just ate a piece of dirt.
The yummy fruit looked like a juicy watermelon but orange.
When i looked at maddy her face looked confused she was still eating it though.
Slurp mmmmmm when i took another bite it felt like the flesh of watermelon was in my mouth.
I looked at other peoples yummy fruits and they had big black hole was there.
It taste like a party was in my mouth just happiness.
Most of the noise I heard was slurp, CHOP, ewwww,mmmmmm.
I really wanted another one but i could not grab another one.
My mood changed i was happy to sad and angry.
I continued eating.
I was confused why I could not eat another.
In my brain I was like why can’t i grab another?
All around me was disgusted faces,confused faces,excited faces, and angry faces.
I know from this day on , I will want to eat the fruit. Because it was delicious!
next time i could add more detail
we learnt about the yummy persimmons
