Tuesday, August 18, 2020
THE GREAT AWAPUNI FUN RUN!!!
I found it really hard to find rich words to use in my story and remember what happend.
I found it easy to discribe what the obsicals were because there were thing that made me remember it.
Next time ill try rich words to use in my story
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Hello Alexis, I think this recount is great. I like the way you described what you were wearing to the fun run. Mabe next time you could mke it a bit longer and I say some mistakes like spelling mistakes and missing spaces in your recount. One place where you forgot to add a space is when you said "somehow" in stead of "some how". It was when you said you got paint in your mouth.
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