Wednesday, September 23, 2020

Persuasive Writing

We learnt how to do persuasive writing. Persuasive writing is when you are trying to get someone on your side like when you want someone's vote when your trying to be president or like on adds when the person who made that add tries to persuade you to buy their product on like tv or on your tablet just any device. So we all have tried to be persuaded or tried to persuade someone. 
It was really easy to find something to work on since people are cutting down trees,polluting the ocean,killing animals there is just so many wrong things happening in the world. But i picked the most simple one pollution! It was easy because first of all you could of searched something up or just go outside and find rubbish on you doorstep or on the side of the road.  
It was really hard to find evidence because i could not get the correct number in New Zealand like how many animals have died from pollution in the ocean it would justgive me the same answer as it would be when i typed how many animal have died from pollution in the whole world it would give me the 100,000 marine mammals.  
Next time instead of pollution in the ocean maybe multiple like people cutting down trees or maybe just the pollution on in the cities like comparing two different cities how much pollution is in france than canada. It would give two different numbers. Or how many cities have cut down trees America or Australia.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Alexis, after reading this I thought i should pick my rubbish (not that is do it anyway) but if I did then I would never litter again! From Daniel

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